Dear James,
I have recently received your letter with complains about the noise from my house. The reason is simple. I have started to renovate my kitchen and living room. It is definitely a noisy process because I have to destroy two walls in order to make a studio-kitchen.
My apologies to you. I really have to do that fast because the builders are going to come this Tuesday. I have to do this in a most noisy way to get in time. Today is Monday so I am going to make some noise one last time. I will try to do all the work till 8 p. m.
After all, I am looking forward to visit you and share a bottle of good wine with you. We will have a great evening if you prepare some supper. I will bring wine, some vegetables, fruit and some good music. I hope that would make amends.
Looking forward to meet you
Your's neigbour, Steven.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 33, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
.... m. After all, I am looking forward to visit you and share a bottle of good wine wit...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... would make amends. Looking forward to meet you Yours neigbour, Steven.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1963190184 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28951926244 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1180884493 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.8571428571 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6428571429 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252121864247 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790199701002 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919634028077 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139643796041 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675074723999 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.9 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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