You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised.
In your letter, include some information about your skills, education and experience. Explain why you are interested in this job.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to apply for a “network specialist” opportunity you announced it on the “Tech Magazine” issue August 17, 2017.
As you can see in my CV, I am an expert computer engineer with 8 years of experience in Network engineering. My main specialties is of course on network security, which could be assumed as an extra skill and come handy in this field. I have some professional certificate related to network which passed by flying grades. Furthermore, as it mention in my resume, I worked in Central Bank for 2 years, I passed a brilliant 3 years of partnership with TAT Bank and right now, I have been working in RighTel company for 3 years.
I could see myself as a talented person with versatility, creativity and team work skills which is very useful in some cases. I also passed some management courses so I can say, by some abilities like brain storming and problem solving, I could perfectly feet in your free position. The reason I send a request for this job is that I am sure I could use all my skills and abilities to fulfill your company’s aim.
If you find my skills and knowledge suitable, please let me know to schedule an interview. I am looking forward to discussing with you about my credentials personally.
Faithfully yours,
Payam Esmaeilpour
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...am, I am writing to you to apply for a apos;network specialist apos; opportun...
^
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m, I am writing to you to apply for a apos;network specialist apos; opportunit...
^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos; opportunity you announced it on the apos;Tech Magazine apos; issue August 17...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74248927039 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84978540773 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618025751073 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3867302038 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136148430542 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505246800635 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336076504349 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851961204403 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195511981725 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.