You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to a letter was sent to me from your bank dated 23th of July, in which you stated that I am $240 overdrawn.
I am one of your customers with good reputation who's had a bank account in the AB bank since 4 years ago. Yesterday I received an email from your bank in which you mentioned that my account is $240 overdrawn and it made me surprised.
On 20th of July, exactly 3 days ago, I did a bank transaction to transfer money from one of my credit cards to another one. Unfortunately, in the middle of transferring money, I faced an error that said it was an incomplete transaction and this amount of money was deducted from my account. According to the bank's announcement it should get back to my account in 72 hours. I guess the bank still couldn't solve the problem.
I suggest you to check my 10 recent bank transactions and check if I am right, then you can contact the bank supervisors who are in charge of the failure section. As they are responsible for this issue, I believe they should compensate the $70.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
... of your customers with good reputation whos had a bank account in the AB bank since...
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Line 6, column 309, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'banks'' or 'bank's'?
Suggestion: banks'; bank's
...ucted from my account. According to the banks announcement it should get back to my a...
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Line 6, column 397, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...unt in 72 hours. I guess the bank still couldnt solve the problem. I suggest you to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, then, i guess, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44761904762 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68503875327 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.592660721 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374753700563 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133968219355 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985100696315 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205244245094 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107152841834 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.