Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations, others, however think that tv and internet is best way to learn discuss both views and give your opinion
These days, people are willing to learn about different countries. It is thought by some that travelling is the best way to obtain knowledge about other nations. While, others believe that people can get information about other countries through browsing and watching television, I completely agree with the formal statement that people get different experience when they visit personally.
According to some experts, travelling play crucial role in order to acquire knowledge about different territories. When people destined to different kingdom, they gain knowledge not only geographically but also about cultures and as well as various customs. For example, a study have shown that when people travel personally to another countries, they get hands on experience about their heritage. In other words, they can learn about host country history, about legends and archeological monuments. Besides, they experience sense of responsibility to represent themselves as a responsible tourist to follow their rules and regulations. Furthermore, they would be able to make new connections and friends. Thus, we can see that travelling is essential to know country and people.
On other hand, some people argue that why we should pay extra money on travelling when we get information with television and internet. It is unquestionable that advance technology including internet and television have all sort of informations. For instance, with the help of internet we can travel across the world. People who wish to visit difficult access continent such as Antarctica, but it would be difficult for them to travel such continents due to harsh weather. Thus, they can obtain all kind of knowledge with the click of a button. Furthermore, televisions have different channels including Discovery and Global Television Network, they exhibit different cultures and customs 24 hours 7 days a week without any cost.
In conclusion, there are some benefits to gain knowledge about different countries through internet and television, but in my opinion, best way to gain information about other territories is travelling.
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- Men and women professions. 65
- The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 68
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...ternet and television, but in my opinion, best way to gain information about other ter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53395061728 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98503066873 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533950617284 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5589599474 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.470588235 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217786719011 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811837324295 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764801735814 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162489188868 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605231840234 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.