It is thought that traveling and discovering abroad make you a complete man. However with the technological advancement, all the foreign information can be gathered via on TV or on the internet. In my opinion, traveling abroad is ideal to learn different aspects and get individual live experiences. The following essay will be discussed why the travel abroad to learn other countries is worthy.
To commence with, traveling abroad as individual, develops your personality. Discovering new countries will gain more experience and the knowledge of other cultures, traditions and customs. Moreover, it develops your personal satisfaction by meeting new people, share their experiences and learn new languages. Traveling abroad also allows you to taste different and authentic food experiments that are perhaps not available in your country. Most importantly, getting the live experience of beautiful sceneries, ambience and the atmosphere is unexplainable and such moment cannot be obtained by internet or television.
On the other hand, with the advancement of technology, most of the foreign information can be easily seen at TV or on the internet. Places that are obviously hard to explore such as northern pole, deserts, adventurous wild life trails, etc. are easier to watch or gather information through TV or internet. Further to this, getting information via internet or via TV is fast and cost effective. As such, most of the people now a days are intending to use internet documentaries on Youtube or television programs such as Animal planet, discovery channel, geographic channel etc. to gather information about other countries.
In conclusion, although internet and TV provide you loads of information about other countries, travelling abroad as individual will develop your personality, having a unique experience, learn different languages and develop your own passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...her information through TV or internet. Further to this, getting information via intern...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ective. As such, most of the people now a days are intending to use internet documenta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57986111111 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12123036527 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9295951762 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248152931839 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845606252615 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564169629764 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163887439068 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439264449558 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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