With the rapid growth of population in the world, the demand for energy is extremely high. As a result of that, many countries are searching for alternative energy sources. Among the energy sources that we consume in present, nuclear energy is a better choice for the high energy demand. The following essay would be discussed whether the nuclear energy is a worth choice for the prevailing demand.
Firstly, it is evident that the nuclear energy has many advantages than the other energy sources in the world. Nuclear energy is considered as a sustainable energy source and it can produce electricity without wasting some of the limited natural resources in the world such as oil, gas or coal. It also contributes to reduce the global warming. Moreover, some of the nuclear plants are extremely larger than other energy plants. As such, many employment opportunities will create for the employees. Thus, it helps to improve country’s economy drastically.
Secondly, we should also accept that there are certain disadvantages when using nuclear energy. As mentioned earlier, to establish a nuclear plant needs a vast land area. Thus, establishing these nuclear plants will be extremely difficult for certain smaller countries. On the other hand, not only the vast land area, but also the cost to establish a nuclear plant may be extremely high. As such, it will be difficult for developing countries to establish nuclear plants. Moreover, nuclear plants sometimes can be extremely dangerous as a simple error can cause a huge explode. These explosions may spread to a huge area and the people who live closer to nuclear plants may have a high risk life. Further, such explosion will cause a huge economic collapse as a country.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons when using nuclear energy. In my opinion, I believe that nuclear energy should be used as an energy source for the high demand. However, nuclear energy plants should only establish where there are enough land spaces available and the countries that the cost for establishing nuclear plants can be financially bearable. As such, developed countries such as USA, Canada, Russia etc., should focus on investing more nuclear plants to produce more nuclear energy for the world and help to reduce global warming.
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...can produce electricity without wasting some of the limited natural resources in the world ...
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...to reduce the global warming. Moreover, some of the nuclear plants are extremely larger tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12834224599 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61348557356 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457219251337 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3246247145 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1818181818 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247297735899 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922663994082 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799862200049 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190713018267 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09386996996 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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