Education is the vital sector of any younger person. However, some people believe that the young people should attend universities while others believe that they should be encouraged to work as mechanics or builders etc. The following essay would be discussed both views.
It is recommended to attend to a university just after finishing the college studies. Entering to a university will make young people experts in particular subjects. They will be able to expand their knowledge of the study field by studying further. This may lead them to become more professionals in the job field and to use their knowledge for new inventions. They become assets to the job industry especially as car mechanics, builders etc. Moreover, they serve better for their society.
On the other hand, some young people are directly shifting to the job industry as a trainee car mechanics or builders just after their college studies. By this, they get more experience in the relevant field and they contribute their service to the society. However, their knowledge will gain from their experience but not from the relevant studies. As such, their experience and the service to the society are limited when compared to those who come out from the universities as graduates.
In my opinion, I believe that every student should attend to university to gain the expert knowledge to serve society. It is always good to serve the society without having limitations. For young people who seek to work just after their college studies might be able to enter to some open universities or private universities to get the expert knowledge while working. As mentioned earlier, education is the vital sector of any younger person to achieve their personal goals as well as to serve the society without any limitations.
- University students always focus on one specialist subject but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 42
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 71
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country while some people think there are other factors What other factors should be considered Within these factors do you think anyone is more important than the others 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...out from the universities as graduates. In my opinion, I believe that every stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in particular, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10169491525 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65989180575 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.812565784 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382129674105 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116859624434 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103074080598 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257764979766 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109469859477 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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