Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, genetic engineering is known as the science of manipulating genes of organism and the new researches on human and crops is on the increase. A group of people believe that genetically modified crops are a significant progress in modern life while a large number of the residents of the world suffer from famine and starvation. Others, however, refute this. Both views will be discussed.
Recent developments in genetically modified crops bring benefits for governments and people, especially farmers who have strong effect on the food industry. The first important positive effect of accessing to such a progress is harvesting the crops with fewer defects, so the farmers are more satisfied with the better yields of desirable crops. In addition, they can benefit the abundant amount of the high quality crops which brings them a good avenue. The second great impact of such products is that governments and sales companies can export products of high quality to other countries which improves the economy.
On the other hand, there are some strong arguments against genetically modified crops. It is believed that the result of these manipulations is not vivid and nobody knows what devastating effects it may have in the future. Besides, it can lead to some unknown diseases with debilitating consequences among people. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that the number of unknown ailments is accelerating rapidly all across the globe.
To sums up, although genetic engineering could access extraordinary achievements in recent years, the result of researches is hazy for people. It needs to be more clarified among people who are the consumers of these products.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-28 | Fay Phan Nguyen | 84 | view |
| 2020-08-28 | Fay Phan Nguyen | 84 | view |
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.Write a letter to the shop andask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods f 73
- The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances Some people regard this change as an improvement while others believe that it is harmful Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.Discuss both t 73
- You have just received a letter from an overseas university saying that your IELTS band score of 6 is too low for admission to any of its Master s Courses you need 6 5 Write a letter to the admissions officer In your letter Introduce yourself Enquire abou 51
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don t really need them Why is it happening in your opinion Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'significant progress'.
Suggestion: significant progress
...eve that genetically modified crops are a significant progress in modern life while a large number of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...gnificant progress in modern life while a large number of the residents of the world suffer from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...nt positive effect of accessing to such a progress is harvesting the crops with fewer defe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27240143369 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8234947601 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4295634825 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170956580721 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600908910886 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451870859867 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970528081636 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603314520262 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.