Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
All around the world universities and colleges are always dealing with how they should allot their budget to various parts to have the best performance in all aspects not only education but also about free times of students. Actually, it is very important subject for universities’ authorities because they would like to keep their universities at the best level and develop their university’ level as well. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether they should allocate financial support to sports and social activities as equal as educational context (classes and libraries and so on) or not. Certainly, some people if asked would agree with the statement that sports and social activities are just as significant as classes and libraries for students, while others would mention the question depends on a great deal of factors ; for example, some universities prefer to think only about their educational subjects compared to thorough sight to all aspects of students' lives. As far as I'm concerned, I adopt a firm position that authorities must allocate budget to all parts of students' lives equally. In what follows I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
First of all, it's important to consider, physical and spiritual health that are made by sports and social activities are as vital as education and studies. Certainly, some people believe that university is a place for enhancing the level of student's knowledge and other activities should do outside the university. However, in most cases universities and colleges would like to pay attention to not only classes and libraries and other educational subjects but also sports and other activities. Indeed, when students are healthy physically and spiritually, there are definitely a good air in universities and it helps universities to attract more students and increase the university' level. As you can see, it is very important subject to pay equally attention to sports and social activities and educational subjects.
Another equally important point to be mentioned is that students who have enough facilities in all facets like sports and social activities they could focus much more on their lessons and studies. Of course, for some students in some situations it would not be true because they would spend all of their times on sports or similar activities and therefore could not be successful in their educational life. However, it would be fair to say that most students are not professional athlete or do not social activities professionally, but they would like to spend their free or leisure times through these activities to have a free mind when they are involving with their studies and lessons on classes or libraries. The results of a study conducted in my university indicate that the most well-known universities all around the world have perfect sports and social activities facilities. It is obvious that universities have studious students that allocate budget equally between educational issues and sports and social activities.
Finally, it helps students to find their other sides of personality when they have all facilities both educational and non-educational (sports and other activities). Indeed, they could discover their hide talents when they have all facilities equally in university or college. I'll be first to admit that some people believe children should find their all talents in school periods. Despite this point of view, there are a plethora of people who have discovered their powerful genius in university' period. By way of example, I can recollect Ali Daie, the best soccer player of Iran, who could find their talent when he studied in Sharif University of Technology in 1991 (at age 22) and after a little while has turned into the best scorer in the world.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I'm of the opinion that in most cases universities should equally allot financial support to sports and social activities and educational issues because it creates a happy atmosphere in universities and helps students to be more concentrated on studies and also find their hide talents. Not only will be useful and proper for students but also help universities to keep and enhance their levels and attract more genius students from all around the world. Consequently, it is highly suggested that authorities should put more emphasis on this subject to have happier and more talented students and subsequently happier and more genius society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, of course, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 50.0 13.8261648746 362% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3833.0 1977.66487455 194% => OK
No of words: 732.0 407.700716846 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23633879781 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.20149002853 4.48103885553 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8675405582 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.389344262295 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1201.5 618.680645161 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1330912211 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.708333333 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231051582158 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804642003168 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577355348696 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147402117232 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602935000644 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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