In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
People nowadays think that working too quickly is the fastest way for success. Some people think that working fast even thought there are mistakes is not a big problem. The matter is to done with the work quickly. Although I understand their point of view I have a different opinion, I believe that working slowly and doing every thing right is the base for success. The base of my opinion is educational, social.
From an educational perspective, students are going to schools and college to learn the bases for their future lives. For example, in schools students go to learn the basis starting from kindergarten till 12th grade. In kindergarten the students learn how to hold the pencil and write their name on the paper. Do you know that take for about a year from a child to learn that. If the teachers skip this process and do it fast and quickly, We will have a huge number of students are not able to write and read. Each teacher in the classroom try her best to help the student to hold the pencil, even thought this process will take one years to be taught. Gradually from grade to grade the teacher and the students work together to do their best. They work slowly and correctly to produce a successful generation. If the teachers work quickly and fast and promote our students to risk, our new generations will got lost.
Socially, people all over the world try to communicate and increase their social net work. Our globe become so open that promotes all the people around the world to work and socialize. But, people have to take care. Nowadays there are a lot of scamming and cheating. For example, on the internet you may talk to some one. He seems to be good person, he start to talk to you and then want to deal in a business with you, if you are risky person and you do not do every thing correct, then he will steel your money. There are many stories like that happen around the world. Many people think they will gain money quickly and fast by doing some business through the internet, but unfortunately the result is not good. They found them self under scamming from others. Therefore people have to think correctly before doing any business or even socialize with any strangers.
In conclusion for the reasons I mentioned above I encourage every one to do the work slowly and correctly. When people doing the work fast with out thinking, they promote them self to danger. Also, the learning process is the most important process in our lives; people have to take their time while they learn. They will benefit more.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In order to become financially responsible adults children should learn to manage their own money at young age Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 46
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- working in the same carrer as your parents 70
- TPO INTEGRATED 43 73
- tpo indepemdent 23 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kly is the fastest way for success. Some people think that working fast even thou...
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Line 5, column 630, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one year', 'a year', or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: one year; a year; years
...il, even thought this process will take one years to be taught. Gradually from grade to g...
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Line 5, column 909, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...dents to risk, our new generations will got lost. Socially, people all over th...
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Line 8, column 313, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...xample, on the internet you may talk to some one. He seems to be good person, he start t...
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Line 8, column 354, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...ome one. He seems to be good person, he start to talk to you and then want to deal in...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... every thing correct, then he will steel your money. There are many stories like ...
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Line 8, column 766, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...d them self under scamming from others. Therefore people have to think correctly before d...
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Line 12, column 140, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...rectly. When people doing the work fast with out thinking, they promote them self to dan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62857142857 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30962347245 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474725274725 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1855053117 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2142857143 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32142857143 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153822789999 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504314311243 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545530508969 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109794020377 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360536090866 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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