Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why its difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness has always been a difficult concept to define . Many philosophers have defined it in different ways. However, they all agreed that the factors responsible for it differ from community to another, and from person to person . In this essay I will discuss some of the factors that may result in being happy.
One factor that most people consider it important to achieve happiness is wealth . Many people link their happiness to the amount of money and the possessions they have. Therefore they are in continuous seek for money . Because happiness for them means luxurious life . While other people think that happiness lies in success . They feel happy if they make an extraordinary achievements . For example, student distinction in his or her study, a breakthrough news unravelled by investigative journalist ,top film acted by actor or actress, or landing on new planet by an astronaut. All those are examples of success which may lead to feeling of positive emotions or happiness .
However, in my view in addition to all factors mentioned above, I see that happiness is unachievable without being in a peace of mind. In fact, there are many wealthy people who are not happy because they obsessed about their wealth loss. Likewise, some successful people live unhappy despite their achievements. That may be due to their imperfection in other aspects of life. For example failure in their loving personal relationships .
In conclusion, happiness can not be related to a single factor. To be happy you need a balance of multifactor to£ reach a degree of peace of mind and thence happiness.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
need one more paragraph about 'Why its difficult to define?'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1295 1500
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.924 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.772 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.842 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.31 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.278 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.455 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09885931559 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86137842369 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.072224649 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5789473684 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8421052632 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277305650313 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921901432003 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942089907479 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158187683716 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566607858002 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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