113. The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. U

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f a university is very important for the surrounding and the university itself. T...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Surrounding
...niversity is very important for the surrounding and the university itself. There is no ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g and the university itself. There is no shortage of debate about whether it is b...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate about whether it is better or not to build a new university located in our co...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Build
...bout whether it is better or not to build a new university located in our communi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iversity located in our community. In my opinion, there are both advantages and d...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are both advantages and disadvantages of this decision. On one hand, it is ad...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...oth advantages and disadvantages of this decision. On one hand, it is advant...
^^^^
Line 13, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... advantagous to locate the university in our community becasue it can provide muc...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asue it can provide much more stores and shops in this area. A university means ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Shops
...it can provide much more stores and shops in this area. A university means a lot...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore stores and shops in this area. A university means a lot of students w...
^^
Line 17, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a. A university means a lot of students will come into this area. In order to sa...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
... university means a lot of students will come into this area. In order to satisf...
^^^^
Line 19, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s area. In order to satisfy the needs of lots of students, different kinds of sh...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dents, different kinds of shops are more likely to station in our community. Not ...
^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likely
..., different kinds of shops are more likely to station in our community. Not only l...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in our community. Not only laundry shop but also salon and other types of stores...
^^^^^
Line 25, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd other types of stores will bring more conveience to our commumity. On the o...
^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conveience
...her types of stores will bring more conveience to our commumity. On the other hand,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hand, with too many students around our community, it will become more complex a...
^^^^^
Line 31, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill become more complex and annoying for the residents. Futhermore, students may ...
^^^^^
Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ecome more complex and annoying for the residents. Futhermore, students may hav...
^^^
Line 33, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Futhermore, students may have different activities which may bother the routine ...
^^^^^
Line 35, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Activities
...ermore, students may have different activities which may bother the routine of our com...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 37, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ersity students may have a welcome party at night, which may disturb the life of ...
^^^^^
Line 39, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch may disturb the life of people in the community. With many other students in a...
^^^^^
Line 41, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Community
...y disturb the life of people in the community. With many other students in and out th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 41, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any other students in and out this area, the security of the community is also a ...
^^^^^
Line 45, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are both advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in our com...
^^^^^
Line 47, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new university in our community, I think that the good part is overweight than th...
^^^^^
Line 49, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...niversity in our community, I think that the good part is overweight than the ba...
^^^^
Line 49, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is overweight than the bad part. It is clear that university is a place for aca...
^^^^^
Line 51, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity is a place for academic study so the students come to learn rather than paly....
^^^^^
Line 53, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
...s a place for academic study so the students come to learn rather than paly. Whats m...
^^^^^^^^
Line 53, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...tudents come to learn rather than paly. Whats more, there is no doubt that univer...
^^^^^
Line 53, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to learn rather than paly. Whats more, there is no doubt that university may st...
^^^^^
Line 55, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ubt that university may stand a rule and discipline their students which means th...
^^^^^
Line 57, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...line their students which means that we dont need to worry about the security pr...
^^^^
Line 57, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r students which means that we dont need to worry about the security problem that...
^^^^^
Line 59, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...dents which means that we dont need to worry about the security problem that m...
^^
Line 61, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it is very important for university to choose a place to locate. As a community...
^^^^^
Line 63, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Choose
...is very important for university to choose a place to locate. As a community to be...
^^^^^^
Line 63, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ersity to choose a place to locate. As a community to become the suitable ...
^^
Line 63, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to locate. As a community to become the suitable location means it is a nice pal...
^^^^^
Line 65, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...means it is a nice palce for the student to live in and study. With the collabera...
^^^^^
Line 67, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... it is a nice palce for the student to live in and study. With the collaberati...
^^
Line 67, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd study. With the collaberation between university and community, the advantages...
^^^^^
Line 69, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommunity, the advantages will definitely overweight than the disadvantages.
^^^^^
Line 71, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overweight
...ity, the advantages will definitely overweight than the disadvantages.
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 71, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... overweight than the disadvantages.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24545454545 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83722629979 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460606060606 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.566198236 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.53405017921 772% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 51.0 5.5376344086 921% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182628992825 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693815876225 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596639258064 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528091069741 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705587493549 0.0645574589148 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.