Your friend has the opportunity to study in either one of two majors (fields of study). Which one of the following two types of majors do you think is a better choice and why?
- A major that would allow your friend to complete his or her studies and get a degree faster (so that your friend can start working full-time soon).
- A major that would require more years of study but is likely to lead to more and better employment opportunities and job offers in the future.
There is no doubt that choosing a major has played a prominent role in all societies. Due to its paramount, efforts for choosing the best major have been always amongst the students' top priorities. No one can deny the direct and indirect effect of this issue in our private lives. A controversial question which is often raised according this issue is whether choose the major with short time or with the good opportunity in the future. Some may hold the view that students must take a full-time job as soon as possible. However, some others take an opposite view and believe that the field is the most important item. I, despite the general consensus, contend that the second belief carries more weight. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into my perspective.
First of all, one should take into account the fact that nowadays finding a job is challenging. As the population of the world increase radically in last century, there are a lot of people who searching for a career. The good major can get us this opportunity that find job easily although it is very hard and may take long time to finish it. take a personal experience as an example; when I chose may major in university, I could choose the ordinary field in my city or better field in farther city. After several consultations with my parents, I selected the second choice and I know my choice help me to be a successful man.
The second reason that I would like to bring about this topic is that I believe it is very important that your major match by your career. You can choose more easier field and finish it sooner. But the number of people that choose it are more than people choose the difficult major. So the people who find the related job are less and people who cannot find the job must choose unrelated career. The result of it is not useful for society because most of the people are not satisfaction in their life. Psychologists have conducted many researches which indicate that the career that relates to the major of employee is the crucial key of calmness of mental.
The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified is that all of the people try to have a good, luxury and comfortable life. Although choosing a major that people can finish it sooner and start full-time job, but the salary of its career is not high and people can only have a regular life. On the other hand the students who finish the main major in universities have a good opportunity for find a better job with a higher rate a salary. The recent study conducted in my country shows that 68 percent of student who graduated in the top major in engineering have a salary above 150.000 dollars each year. Also their life satisfies them, although they believe that they tried very hard in young time.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that major have a key role in success. The people must choose the best major in universities according to their ability because it can help them to finding a good job and present them a good opportunity in the further. Consequently, it is highly recommended that the school must encourage the students to choose the best field and concentrate on it to build their future .But that was the story in a nutshell. In fact, there are a myriad of other reason, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ood opportunity in the future. Some may hold the view that students must take a full...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, in fact, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.0286738351 263% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2805.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 612.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.470486109 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442810457516 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 883.8 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2342561454 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.178571429 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169484925273 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046591538598 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397009768532 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102018131999 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158261564037 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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