In modern world, students have the option of learning both from the teachers as well as from the internet. But is the evolving technology capable of replacing the human necessity? Some people think that it is always better to learn under the tutelage of a teacher as they are experienced in this field. However, I strongly disagree with this notion for the following reasons.
To embark upon, internet or television is the best way to learn because it saves a lot of money, time and most importantly it is more feasible. It is no exaggeration to mention that technology has open the doors to a world of immense knowledge which is required for the unceasing rise in competition nowadays. For example, my ten year old son knows a lot more than my nephew who lives in a small town where there is no internet facility.
Moreover, my son has not only learned Spanish but also becoming excellent in playing guitar and the credit for all this goes to the revolutionary change in the education system.Furthermore, thousands of students in my country are unable to pursue their education due to the lack of funding which is very deplorable. But the new sources of information are like a boon to them as with the help of it, they can now fulfill their dreams.
Conspicuously, many might argue that internet is fatal for the students because it might spoil them. Conversely, I can say assertively that everything technology has to offer is tremendously beneficial to students and the world at large. People who are evil can misuse anything good in this world. It is indeed up to us how we want to use it.Lastly, I must say that the advantages of technology far outweigh any negative repercussions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...tion of learning both from the teachers as well as from the internet. But is the evolving ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...utionary change in the education system.Furthermore, thousands of students in my country ar...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
...ulfill their dreams. Conspicuously, many might argue that internet is fatal for the st...
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Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lastly
...s indeed up to us how we want to use it.Lastly, I must say that the advantages of tech...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76870748299 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89981895548 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4962355128 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223157168393 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716231725432 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719098697838 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128027302584 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820479170642 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.