Dear Ali,
I hope this letter finds you well. As you had mentioned in your last letter regarding the situation you have in the work, I understand your feeling about that because I face it before.
As you know, I had been working for AFG company for 3 years. They moved me to another branch of the company in a different city far from where I live. Then, I have the same problems like the accommodation that I should search for and the transportation to a new city where I don’t know anybody there.
But, I overcome that situation by these solutions which I’m going to suggest it for you. Firstly, try to collect more information about the city, secondly, make calls with other colleagues in the same branch where you go. Finally, you should take this issue as a motivation to improve and showing your skills to get a better chance in the future either get a promotion in your company or move to another big company with a higher salary than you have now.
Hope to see you soon and let me know if these suggestions work for you or not?
Best wishes,
Ibrahim
- Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems 85
- Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news.Do you think all news true?What is the function of newspaper? 78
- Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions What is your opinion on this change How is this change will affect children s life in your view 78
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction do you agree or disagree 88
- many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52040816327 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46577995852 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3787840899 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 4.34317383033 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348272226603 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133346619214 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103640875911 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230468883296 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875835334261 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.