Nowadays cars are become very popular, almost every people owned it. Earlier it was considered to be an luxury but today people see cars as a necessary addition to their life. As a result number of cars on the roads are increasing steeply, which actually creating some other issues. In order to change this increasing trend some people suggests that strict road tolls should be levied on busy roads. I completely agree with this statement.
first, we should have to look in to the negative effect of this scenario. cars or in other words motor vehicles are creating so many problems. The main conce...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ned it. Earlier it was considered to be an luxury but today people see cars as a n...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ompletely agree with this statement. first, we should have to look in to the negat...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cars
...o the negative effect of this scenario. cars or in other words motor vehicles are cr...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...using fossil fuels for its functioning. Although there are other alternatives are availa...
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Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Currently
...s of productive man hours in the roads. currently it is quite common that people are bein...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...orld are introducing different methods. one of the popular practice is that, imposi...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...that, imposing tolls on the busy roads. which means people who use their vehicles on ...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: successful
...uch places. This method is proven to be successful in number countries like Singapore and USA. T...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ithdraw their cars from the busy roads. so that they can ensure environment friend...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ithdraw their cars from the busy roads. so that they can ensure environment friendly co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 7.48453608247 347% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 937.175257732 200% => OK
No of words: 384.0 206.0 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42202620496 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 290.88556701 202% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0454232837 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325638660042 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940645174753 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957438683605 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209114637866 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107497205329 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 41.2886597938 213% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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