world travel was revolutionized in the 20th Century to the extent that the world has now become a global village. What factors will influence travel this century? Will travel continue to grow or will it become less popular?
The trend of recent decades, the so called “globalization”, has deeply changed our societies, and therefore our lives.
Recent innovations and discoveries in technology, communication, in science of materials, and other important fields, have improved our lifestyle in many ways, but have also undermined it. This century has indeed started with lots of contradictions. Traveling is a great example of it: in the last twenty years we spectated to an astonishing increase in number of flights and cars. Those two way of traveling are the most popular, but are also threatening our future.
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