Corruption becomes a common disease among several nations. What are the causes and measures to resolve this trend? Give your own examples and explain.
Bribe becomes a dreadful disease in several nations, where only rich people are able to enjoy various benefits. Common people are forced to pay extra to avail the most of the government services. In the following passage, I will explain both reason and measured to change this trend.
Few decades ago, bribe is an unknown term among people, but this has changed over the years. When government employees are paid with meagre salary, they are forced to bribe for the service they do and it spreads like a common disease in most of the departments. There is no standardised salary structure between state and private sector staff, which provoke them earn extra for all the obliged services. Moreover, with the minimum package they are unable to pay satisfy their dependent’s educational needs as well as to provide quality medical treatment during emergency situations. For instance, my neighbour works in state job got caught due to corruption charges and the only reason is to provide optimum treatment for his injured son. Therefore, it is believed, different salary structure and incomparable quality of service between private and government hospital and schools are the major reasons for this trend.
Do common people’s living conditions are affected with corruption? Yes. At the present to get most of the government service people are forced to pay extra as bribe, where some poor people unable to find money end up in bad living standards. For example, countries such as Canada and Australia, offer unpaid medical and academic facilities to all citizens, such system should be introduced to eradicate this disease. Additionally, all the state and central jobs should be equally paid according to market standards, which will reduce huge finance gap among all employees.Thus, it is assumed, unpaid medical and educational facilities and standardised salary structure across government staff can reduce corruption significantly.
To sum up, as the proverb says,” prevention is better than cure”. If the government hasn’t take prompt action to reduce corruption then it will impacts common people’s living condition drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41420118343 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89176023058 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.833844009 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139297132397 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522794243492 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509822125743 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982881994324 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733974449981 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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