Success in life career is one of very important part during life, however it is not worth to omit happiness in time we fail. Actually, happiness is the most crucial part of a person's life. The most important question regarding this is that if success is more valuable or happiness. From my point of view, I deeply believe that happiness is an unchangeable treasure in life career and what is follows I will attempt to address the most discernable reasons.
Firstly, happiness an optimism helps to get progress in life. Accordingly, people may fail in life but it is much more important to be realistic and try to solve problem to be successful. My university entrance exam is the best epitome regarding this. Two years ago, the time that I wanted to go to university, I tried some mock exam but the result was awful; Even though that multiplicity of student could act better than me but it did not cold my feet. I tried to strength my deficit point and in actual test I took the fourth seat . That experience taught me to be more optimistic and eschew any bad feeling in failure time can bring much success in soon future.
In addition, failure make people nervous that is the source of many diseases. Actually, if a person cannot admit his problem, avoiding solve point he would try to pass the buck and this worse the situation. For instance, In my second year In master program, I took the worst mark among all students. That experience made me mad in a way that I never come to fruition afterward. Indeed, the problem was obvious in my personal life too, where I got temper against all of my family. Regarding to be more optimistic and happy to turn the table, I tried to oppose and the result avoid me to participate in PHD exam. This experience was a bitter pill to swallow and learned me that if a person would not be happy in failure time more problem makes the situation worst.
Finally, life is current and people can participate in exam again. For instance, the time that my brother wanted to take his master university entrance exam, he failed in more than three times, but the result made him more enthusiastic to beat the exam. Finally, by forgetting his failure and optimism he accepted. That story learned me that happiness is important attribute in tough situation.
All in all, as the aforementioned example have illustrated, one swallow does not make a summer and a failure can be completely compensated through happiness and optimism. Not only it helps people to develop in their life career but also it makes good chance and avoid any nervousness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...happiness is the most crucial part of a persons life. The most important question regar...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd in actual test I took the fourth seat . That experience taught me to be more op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67472527473 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61862216013 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2321426787 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4782608696 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113447986395 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325588425423 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329091352116 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667632490675 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455659886373 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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