Some people believe that it is very important for children now a days to learn other langauge at a younger age like in primary school level rather then in higher grades. Recently it is very popular for children to learn more then one language. With the advent of technology and tourism more then one way of communication is crucial. There are certain benefits of learning other country language at younger age. At the same time there are some drawbacks for this too. This essay will explain positive and negative aspects of this issue with a final opinion.
On the one hand some researchers believe that it is beneficial to learn at early ages of development. One of the reason for their believe is that there is always more chances of learning and adaptation at younger age. Brain is still in a phase of development so it is good to learn new challenges at primary school level then at secondary school level. Another reason for this concept is that if kids are aware of more languages they have more options to decide their carrier in secondary school level. For example some kids want to become expert in languages like french and spanish . There are more job options being multilingual too. So it is easy to decide at early age what future options children can adapt.These reason besides many more convince many believer to support the idea of teaching children other language at younger age.
On the other hand some people think that it is not appropriate for children to learn other language in primary school level. According to them it can cause a lot of stress and pressure for a child which can effect their personality development. They can loose their self confidence. Another reason for their believe is that if children are forced to learn foreign language they can eventually loose their mother language. Due to these facts there are chances of loosing cultural values. So due to these factors it is more beneficial for kids to learn foreign language at a mature level like secondary school level.
Although there are valid advantages and disadvantages of the fact ,in my opinion advantages are more effective then disadvantages. It is more beneficial for children to learn foreign language at primary school level rather then secondary school level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, still, then, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88082901554 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54672367319 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411917098446 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1377446894 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378161775694 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12850745052 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10472915582 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279534969046 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487699757042 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.