If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area will you choose?
Recently, climate change is one of the most important issues which need to discuss seriously and it has a magnificent effect on human beings life. Climate change to hotter temperature caused drought water shortage and as a result starvation and death for human beings. Therefore if I have to choose a particular field in climate change, I would prefer to investigate about global warming and suggest solutions to prevent it.
Global warming has the most significant influence on human's life. There for if human has ignored the phenomenon result of green gas emission, getting out of renewal resources, water shortage and drought which are the cause of Global warming, they would faced the death immediately.
Although Global warming inevitably affected human's life, people could control if by reduce the usage of fossil foils and produce the green house gasses. The solution is using the electrical cars instead of the one's work with fossil foils. On the other hand people should pay attention to consume water and reduce the deforestation as an typical life style.
In conclusion, because of the global warming important effects on human being life, I would decided to study about that to survive humans on the earth and also increase their knowledge about climate change and its detrimental influences on ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...nd it has a magnificent effect on human beings life. Climate change to hotter temperat...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... starvation and death for human beings. Therefore if I have to choose a particular field ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...g has the most significant influence on humans life. There for if human has ignored th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een gas emission, getting out of renewal resources, water shortage and drought wh...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...the cause of Global warming, they would faced the death immediately. Although Glob...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ough Global warming inevitably affected humans life, people could control if by reduce...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e water and reduce the deforestation as an typical life style. In conclusion, bec...
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Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...nt effects on human being life, I would decided to study about that to survive humans o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20093457944 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5890760321 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3529639431 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805257210999 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351262713183 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435954595015 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512599755741 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514585233617 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.