Crime is considered as the modern day cancer. Many of the countries in the world are trying to eradicate it but still exist all around the world. Moreover there is a dangerous trend can be seen in crimes in cities around the world, which is, most of the offenders are youths.
First of all, todays life style should be blames for this scenario. People are always been busy with their work life, as a result there will be very less family bond among family members. it is actually adversely affecting the children and youth, they do whatever they want to do, because there in no one to teach them about whats is wrong and what is right. Such kind of things should be thought in families itself. Secondly, high unemployment rate in cuties also adding fire to this problem. When young people failed to get what they deserve, they will frustrated and may end in doing bad things to earn money. Lastly, todays entertainment media like movies and video games are also influencing youngsters negatively. They try to do what they see in this movies and games without thinking about its real time effects.
To tackle this problem of youth crimes, pubic and governments should work together. Families always spend some time together and talk to each other, especially with children. Also always try to maintain a friendly relationship among parents and children. Furthermore, governments should try to create as many as job opportunities they can to fulfil the requirements of growing youth population looking for a job. On top of that, when youngster commit a crime, the judicial system should look in to the all the aspect of that crime and the accused and give punishments that will help them to come out of such situations. Giving hard punishments to such cases will result in more harm than good.
To recapitulate, there are many reasons behind the increasing number of youth crimes in cities. Both the society and government has the equal responsibility to deal with this issue effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: It
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...use there in no one to teach them about whats is wrong and what is right. Such kind o...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'frustrate'
Suggestion: frustrate
...led to get what they deserve, they will frustrated and may end in doing bad things to earn...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tively. They try to do what they see in this movies and games without thinking about...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o each other, especially with children. Also always try to maintain a friendly relat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, kind of, as a result, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57749106839 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9727513304 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1578947368 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218701319392 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611556858949 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585031489859 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143404493375 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565655266949 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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