Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living in a constantly changing world, our experience of life also variates nonstop as the society advances. Some people might find the alteration so bewildering that they become less pleasant or satisfied. As far as I am concerned, however, the rapid transformation offers us valuable opportunities to better enjoy life, materially and spiritually, hence virtually increases our sense of satisfaction. In the ensuing paragraphs I will elaborate my reasons for holding this view.
To begin with, the enormous improvement in productivity largely levels up people's living standard. As we are more and more capable of grow crops, produce commodities and construct public utilities, people enjoy the richness of material and convenience of transportation than they did in the past. This will definitely make life much easier and thus lead to the increase of satisfaction. For example, my parents could barely gain enough food to eat in their childhood while I actually never need to worry about food since my birth owing to the rapid development of productivity. And my father and mother always tell me how lucky and fortunate I am to born in this time. Clearly, people from last generation are more satisfied to live in a fast prospected world.
Moreover, the progress of technology, especially computer science in the last few years, greatly enriches people's mind. Ever since the wide spread of personal computers and cell phones as well as the popularity of social websites and applications, people are entitled with the privilege to reach out to a bigger world they never had before. In this way they are brought new and fresh ideas and different cultures, which makes happier than before.
Admittedly, some people might concern that we need to spend more time to adapt to this fast changing world and we are likely to lose ourselves in huge amount of information due to it. But we can find our way to deal with it with help form the society.
To put it in a nutshell, our world progresses at a speed nobody has seen in the precedent, which necessitates us to tackle the issues coming along with this situation. Nevertheless, as argued above, as long as we act accordingly and keep it up with the era, we will be more delighted and fulfilled thanks to the advancement of our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... find our way to deal with it with help form the society. To put it in a nutshell, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87884706379 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596354166667 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1921590511 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191111128544 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607905440536 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481932977854 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101443309087 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205489634623 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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