In the last decades, technology has exerted considerable impacts in business in astounding ways. Purchasing items on the internet like publications, plane permits and goods becomes increasingly prominent; however, i believe that the benefits of dealing via on stream can prove absolute superiorities over drawbacks. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, critics insist that the mounting anxiety is the leading inconvenience of shopping by online networks. When the consumer cannot touch and feel the pieces, which generally form a solid basis of deriving satisfactions, there is a high probability that the elements could differ sharply on what you view on the screen. This can be exemplified by the fact that the wonderful burgundy dress turned out to be more of a purple shade, which apparently ascertains the lapses of wired shoppings. Next, privacy and security are the greatest concern for people who wish to adopt this type of culture. For instance, clients could be burdened with crippling debts, if they did not seem acutely conscious because there are lots of false sites that usually intensify in circumventing citizens.
On the other hand, it ought to be highlighted that the advantages certainly outweigh the above mentioned short comings because of the following two logical reasons. Firstly, it is incredibly favourable since the customer can shop from the comfort of his own home. If the weather is dreadful, there is a heavy stream of traffic, the buyer may still shop while watching movies and managing domestic activities. Secondly, inexhaustible choices and gratification remain the most excellent facet of selecting electronically connected purchasing products. For many, while the buyer has to settle for whatever price the vendor has placed on an item, networked buying opens up copious opportunities to compare prices from hundreds of different vendors swiftly. Also, these types of cabled systems reflect wide views of purchasers that can grant an individual to form a definitive judgement.
In conclusion, presumably, owing to the wide option and pure luxury, it ascertains why the electronic shopping is strongly preferred.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
1. the topic asked:
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
but we didn't see any of them.
2.
before however and after however, the ideas are identical, so however is not properly used:
Purchasing items on the internet like publications, plane permits and goods becomes increasingly prominent; however, i believe that the benefits of dealing via on stream can prove absolute superiorities over drawbacks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1807 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.284 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.844 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.44 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.497 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.032 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ecomes increasingly prominent; however, i believe that the benefits of dealing vi...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... why the electronic shopping is strongly preferred.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4269005848 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93072904529 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675438596491 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4696968687 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.733333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117384019517 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03212817551 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254653946651 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567245019247 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216925731182 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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