Writing Task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to your neighbor to say goodbye, as you decided to leave the area and move to a new home. In your letter say
– Explain why you are moving.
– What will you miss the most?
– Invite him/her to your new home.
Dear Jay,
Hope this letter finds you well. You have been a great neighbour and any family like your company as their neighbours. Me and my wife leaving this apartment and going to move in new city Pune, as I was offered with a very good job in one of the MNC and I don't want to miss this opportunity. I want to personally say Goodbye to you through this letter.
Thank you so much for being very friendly and thoughtful neighbor. You made us feel welcome in the neighborhood when we just transferred here and you have become very good friends of ours. We have enjoyed several years of our stay in the town because of you and we are so grateful. We will miss the each moment we spend together and each festivals and occasions we celebrated together, especially I will miss the Hyderabadi Biryani cooked by your wife. I am going to throw a house warming party and I would love you to come. It will be on the 5th of July and starts at 7 pm. We will have dinner together with my other friends.
Hope to see you on that day. If you cannot make it, you are always welcomed to come another time.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a very good job in one of the MNC and I dont want to miss this opportunity. I want t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29716981132 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32153595533 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.104923031 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0714285714 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266751109009 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902783154215 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05733315159 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182052913241 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476711107788 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.02 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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