In many nations, only a limited proportion of folks are paid handsome salaries. While some people think that this type of culture is valuable for the state, others claim that the regime ought to retain an optimum line of wages. This essay will discuss both sides and reach a relevant conclusion.
On the one hand, primarily, generation of strong motivations in a person is the leading outcome of paying top wages for some people. Take Cristiano Ronaldo for an instance. Generally speaking, owing to the above normal income, the superstar is sharpening his essential skills, which oftentimes captiva...
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Essay evaluation report
On the one hand, primarily, generation of strong motivations in a person is the leading outcome
On the one hand, primarily, the generation of strong motivations in a person is the leading outcome
to be rewarded decent payment, which usually provide immense satisfactions
to be rewarded decent payments, which usually provide immense satisfactions
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 2032 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.376 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.804 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 169 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.753 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.465 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would always be
...e impacts. Firstly, for many, a citizen would be always paralysed with terrible fears in high p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53439153439 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92249863855 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65873015873 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6713781495 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.058823529 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203928958201 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535538260652 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469766442201 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105366706582 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722120247942 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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