Whether or not living in a small community brings advantages and disadvantages is widely debated with many people claiming that living in cities has more advantages than living in small community.
In my opinion this essay merit serious consideration and I will explain why with pertinent argument and examples. There are myriad of argument in favor of my stance the most conspicuous ones is the advantages associated with living in a small community. These advantages include healthy aging, good community support and good association with your neighbors. Research has shown that 85% of people over the age of 100 are living in small community as a result of home made meals, consumption of chemical free food and good association with their neighbors.
Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is avoidance of unnecessary medications that those in the city consume and become addicted to all through their life. For instance underpinning the aforementioned, an empirical is that those living in small community are not always face with diseases such as kidney failure, heart attack, angina, cancer and diabetes.
However, despite the advantages that community living offer there are also disadvantages such as poor income, poor education, fear of the unknown and poor medical system. Living under those circumstances pose a treat to life. For instance if a family member is sick and required urgent medical attention which cannot be provided by a small community service can lead to dead if patient cannot be transfer quickly to city for urgent medical attention. Consequently, the government is introducing a good medical system to all community to help save life if it is needed by members of the community without travelling over some distance.
In view of the advantages and disadvantages outline above one can conclude that the benefit/impacts of living in community are too great to be ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24918032787 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93856105792 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4291575055 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.416666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496645736123 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181404010279 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158925920223 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314333661202 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162713092747 0.056905535591 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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