It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives.
The topic of the essay is very sensative. Some people thinks that old and conventional staying place is better because the plase is known to them. Therefore, they knows the possible noke and cones of the place. However, according to me the new place is always better because it offers new opportuinity and new experience particularly for the adult people.
First and foremost, the old plase is trite and not interesting because we have lived there from our childhood. We learned all aspects of the place so it is not interesting. Whereas, the new place provides new opportuinity and scope for a person. The new place is very interenting because it is unknown. Like when Columbus discovered the America, it was great opportuinity to the rest of the world. The people will learn new living technique and skills of the new place and so they can use it to their regular live and that will enhance their productivity and will imprve their lifestyle. Therefore the adults should come out of their existing living place and live new place.
Secondly, the resources of the old place becomes depleted day by day comsumption and thats why one should scarch for the new sources. Therefore, it is good for us to scarch for new places for resources and living purposes. Sometime the new place gives us new opportuinity like new learning environment and new business area and many more. For that from ancient time the people from europe traveled the sea to sell goods all over the world. Even now the young peoples come abroad to study and doing research for better prosperity.
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- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in thepresent. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer. 66
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. 60
- Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why? 60
- It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...plase is known to them. Therefore, they knows the possible noke and cones of the plac...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence particularly for the adult people. First and foremost, the old plase is tri...
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Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tivity and will imprve their lifestyle. Therefore the adults should come out of their exi...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isting living place and live new place. Secondly, the resources of the old place...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...mes depleted day by day comsumption and thats why one should scarch for the new sourc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57303736118 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503703703704 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9389673613 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187485111678 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642789034837 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595672757386 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132462907856 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232581138991 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.