Many people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.
Nowadays, one of the most indispensable items in each person's life is a suitable and comfortable accommodation in which family members can spend time with each other and relax. Among various types of accommodations such as houses, flats and high-rise apartments that people choose to live, the owning method is different. While a group of people prefer to rent a house, others are in favor of buying one.
There are some significant disadvantages of renting a house that have devastating impacts on the family unit. First of all, the majority of people have to spend a large amount of money on renting a house. A salient example of this is UK in which finding accommodation is a nightmare for the residents of metropolitan cities such as London since the rents are so high and almost 70% of individuals are not satisfied with the rent they pay. Secondly, some of the landlords are imposing strange and exotic laws for the tenants such as not keeping a pet at house or holding loud parties after a particular time. Finally, getting use to new neighborhood is a severe challenge for the new tenants especially those who have children.
On the other hand, the advantages of renting an accommodation should not be neglected. Renting a house give the individuals the chance to invest money on other industrial fields such as funding a company, running a new market and the like. Furthermore, it is the best accommodation for overseas students who seeks for a place of living and they usually prefer to share a house with other students to mitigate the expenditures. Moreover, the tenants can easily change their house in case of any difficulties that they encounter such as noisy neighbors, inappropriate neighborhood and the like. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in 2008 almost 40% of the immigrants to Australia preferred to stay in rental accommodation for the first year.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages of renting an accomodation, the advantages by far outweigh them and the renting method has its
advocates all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...of the most indispensable items in each persons life is a suitable and comfortable acco...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sfied with the rent they pay. Secondly, some of the landlords are imposing strange and exot...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eigh them and the renting method has its advocates all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98319327731 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97251016476 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4701067983 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.071428571 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208836697352 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806016989902 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710766453335 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109418646229 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583099456299 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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