Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree strongly with the statement that food has become easier and this change has improved the way people live.Generally speaking, when we visit to a grocery shop,we can see people choosing food either which are ready made or just cut vegetables and processed food, that makes cooking easier.In addition to that in comparison to our ancestors the advancement of technologies is proven to save half of the time in cooking or preparing food .Mainly two reasons,first is that working people need to save kitchen time for extra leisure time and second is that people now a days want to spend some time in enjoyment or we can say the demand for amusement is increasing among people so they try to save other day to day personal time.
I believe, in the contemporary world many people have adapted to do works, which demand more time and efforts.So this is a necessity for people to save time in cooking and other personal things.As a result they can pay more attention to their work and improve their standard of living.For example If a company pays more for over duty,then people can find the convenient ways to work for extra hours.For which they will be paid more and can save more money for a secure future.So it is the best way to save time from personal things like cooking.Consequently they can work, save money, improve standard of living and on the other hand can have good and healthy food ,spend time with their family members simultaneously.
From my personal observation, I've seen my mother spending maximum time of a 24 hours in kitchen.I am from India and during those days finding a fridge in an Indian kitchen was a symbol of sophistication.She had to struggle to help us in our study or mere a leisure time.Gradually when I grew up our kitchen was filled with refrigerator,micro wave oven,mixer grinder and induction heater,blender and many more things.Now a days she has to spend hardly 1 hour to finish many verities of food at a time.In contrast to that I can spend more time in my own study,relaxing,or helping my daughter in her study, because I am privileged to have all the modern technologies in my kitchen to save cooking time.
In summary,I would like to mention that technologies both in home appliances and in food industries have changed peoples' lives in a productive way.
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