A member of your family is thinking about going to university. Write an email to your family member explaining:
Why some people go to university (new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).
Why some prefer universities far from home.
Which courses you think would be interesting and/or useful.
Hi Alan,
I am glad that you have decided to study in university for your further studies. There are few things I like you to know before you step into university premise.
Firstly, in university you will ask to do presentations, attending field trips and complete the thesis. Make sure you outperform everyone in order to get the good grades. Secondly, reputed companies prefer those who secured university degrees rather than merely college education. Lastly, it will broaden your intellectual dimension that would allow you to exercise good judgments in your challenging situations.
Studying away from home will give you a sense of survival techniques. Like many other students who bear their own expenses you will also learn to live in this tough era. This struggling period will give you strength profusely to defend yourself for now and in future.
Many courses are now outlined by the universities which provide great deal of benefits. However, in my point of view, environment science is preferable because this will enable you to understand the reasons and effects of greenhouse gases which have been a global concern and the possible outcomes to mitigate them.
I hope my advice will help you to accelerate your education and would give you an edge in the career growth. Wish you the best.
Yours
Noor Ali Bhayani
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-11-13 | noorali.bhayani@srb.gos.pk | 60 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rofusely to defend yourself for now and in future. Many courses are now outlined by th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12272727273 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63628134668 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8580490319 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108371437843 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443756221532 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032178610297 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645055045239 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250331265194 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.