Some people believe that scientists are controlling the world, others, however, others believe that politicians are controlling the world, discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that scientists and politicians have significant influence in our societies. While scientists can change the society by their inventions, I believe that politicians are more likely to involve in manipulating a country.
On the one hand, the innovation of technologies has changed our world ever than before which authority is belongs to the scientists. For example, the invention of computer changes the technique of education, communications, and business, medical as well as entertainments. This development offers us to save long distance travelling by enjoying online video conferences on computer. In addition, the results of scientific research on human health reward us with surviving long life cycle. For example, human organ transplantation is one of the advancement of medical science which allows people to replace their damaged body parts.
However, despite the above distinctive roles of scientists, I would argue that the politicians have more participation in controlling the society. They could make the major decisions for people from their government position which leads us to all relative changes of our lifestyle. For instance, they could place a financial burden on people by imposing heavy tax or expose a threat for other countries by generating a war such as the World War II started by Hitler. Furthermore, politicians could ensure the individuals skill development and their safety because they have the authority to support the expansion and exploitation of scientific research.
In conclusion, while the scientists have power to change the society by their conceptions, my own view is that politicians are more influential to us for their considerable decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51908396947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22648016146 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3214262344 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147401477243 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504629212695 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429586787379 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901604024899 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040976996594 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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