Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. You will be glad to know that I got admission in "Green Valley" university in Canada so, I will be moving there soon. But before that I need your help in finding a part time job for me as soon as possible.
Firstly, I have taken admission in a Hospital Management course which is of two years and is extremely significant for the growth of my career. Additionally, the institution is also highly prestigious which will further add on to my profile. However, I have taken a bank loan to pursue my education and thus, I intensively require a part time job there. Also, my family can not bear my expenses since my father is a retired government officer.
Therefore, it would be great if you can assist me in getting a part time employment which is sufficient to pay my bills etc. I could not think of anyone else other than you for this support because you have been staying there since long and is familiar with the whole process and system to get things done swiftly plus you are my best friend too.
Looking forward for your expedite reply.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...fore that I need your help in finding a part time job for me as soon as possible. Firs...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ation and thus, I intensively require a part time job there. Also, my family can not bear...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...great if you can assist me in getting a part time employment which is sufficient to pay m...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r expedite reply. See you soon, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58252427184 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55721594301 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2500346 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239658980199 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960257304135 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670972576899 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140006268237 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813805854284 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.