The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
In present-day society, it seems to be an increasingly widespread concern that the crime rate has been increasing day by day in juvenile. This problem can be attributed to a number of reasons have been put forward to this phenomenon. However, there are feasible measures to tackle this issue.
First, it is undeniable that the most serious factor associated with juvenile crime is the demise of family life. For clarification, teens adopt moral and ethical values from their parents and other family members that means the family plays a vital role in shaping a teenager’s behavior and grooming their personality. Notwithstanding, teens become violent or show signs of juvenile delinquency only when they are facing disturbance at home that could regarding teens to go astray and become violent. Besides, another reason leading to this situation is that the lack of communication. In other words, when juveniles are not having any communication with their parents or family members, they may lose unity, trust, and understanding which can eventually lower their self-esteem or self-confidence. They will tend to do things they should not do to boost their self-confidence such as they will blindly follow their peers and adopt their unhealthy lifestyles.
In order to solve these problems, the majority obvious solution is the family should have a positive attitude towards society. Parents and elder siblings should show the children positive values, norms and standards of society. More importantly, parents should spend more time with their children and tell them the consequences of breaking laws that government has made for public safety and betterment. Parents should make sure that they observe equality of rights, justice and condemn discrimination.
In conclusion, there is an escalation of crimes conducted by youngsters facing with family conflicts and lacking family attention. Nevertheless, it is very likely that frequent family bonding can eradicate the negative behaviors of their children.
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Suggestion:
... condemn discrimination. In conclusion, there is an escalation of crimes conduct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48874598071 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00873581193 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3538298484 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998058324339 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036144096312 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471909691545 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675307338281 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739329976976 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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