The stipulated charts depicts the total number of Japanese tourists travel abroad for a span of 10 years from 1985 to 1995 and australia's share of Japan's tourist market at the same time. The mentioned parameters are number of tourists in millions and percentage of Australia's share on the same.
It is evident from the chart that Japanese tourists traveling abroad showed a gradual increase during the first five years of 1985 to 1990, the figures rose from 4.5 million to 11 million. But in the year of 1991 it showed an unexpected decline of 0.5 million tourists as compared to previous year figures of 11 million. The numbers were peaked during the year of 1995 and touched the all time high of 15.5 million.
Moving to the data about Australia's share of Japan's tourist market from 1985 to 1994, it showed a steep increase from 2% to 6.2% despite some fluctuations during the years of 1989 and 1994. During those years Australia lose almost 1% and 0.2% of market share respectively.
Overall it is clear from the charts that Japanese people are always interested in going abroad for visits and Australia becomes their favorite spot and holds a considerable percentage of Japan's tourist market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89268292683 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47886485506 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9758914232 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42682471533 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207803049987 0.103423049105 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124618854243 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285011663435 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121816621516 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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