Generally speaking, the new modern world has changed enormously in last decades. The humanity stats quo is much different from the past years. In the history of humankind, the changes have been started by the industrial revolution, and we continued this path until now, and we carry on. However, we owe this to last generations but, In my point of view, the life gets easier and more comfortable day after day for the following reasons.
First of all, the level of comfortability in all countries has been developed because of the science. Many scientists all over the world strive for this goal to makes our world safer and more comfortable. Technology and many aspects of science like medical caring developed our practical abilities and made us competence to survive. We changed our environment compatible with our priorities and exploited all resources in deployment of this goal. For example, the statistical reports show the death in result of chronic diseases has been changed a lot. Once plague was a chronic diseas in which could kill millions of people, but nowadays nobody hear about it anymore in the result of our high technologies and improvements in medical fields.
Secondly, according to human history, we are more civilized than before. Developing of social laws and democracy according to needs and therefore general satisfaction shows this key-point that we revere others perspectives and we have a healthier community. For instance, our grandparents had to work from childhood dawn to dusk day in day out. On the other hand, we have strict laws in which makes it essential for children to study and prohibit exploiting of children for work.
Another example of this development is we have standards for everything. It's not even conceivable now to work every day with no holidays for fourteen hours a day but our grandparents experienced this kind of crucial situations. However, now we have laws and standards for each social interactions like the standard hours of work, etc.
Based on all point mentioned above, we have easier life today in contrast to last decades. Anyway we cant ignore this point in which we owe this life to whom sacrificed their life with strive and countless efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hears'.
Suggestion: hears
...millions of people, but nowadays nobody hear about it anymore in the result of our h...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... in contrast to last decades. Anyway we cant ignore this point in which we owe this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04359673025 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79637056182 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558583106267 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.629751955 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4210526316 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903277097865 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313127670218 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309005207751 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566834941797 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196838128542 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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