Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The essential question of prompt is whether theachers are more appreciated in past or not? certinly, some people, if asked, would argee with the statement. while others would say it is double-edged due to great deal of factors involved, as far as i am concerned, i adopt firm position that teacher were not valued in the past in compere with present.
firstly, on reason for that is, not only most poeple are not liked teachers but also they hate them, addentially most of people did not liked new things that teather talk about. in some cases teathers kilded because of their ideas. for instance i remmber one of most famous techers is 19 centray. his name was jack thomas and he lived in england, he's idea was to improve people knowledge and he killed by a group of people just because of his ideas, as you can see teacher was not well accepted in the past and even they lost their life just because of their idea.
secondly, people in past dont like new thing and it lead them to disagree with learning. this caused teacher to have less income and not get so much money. because of that we can not say they were so much valueted in past. for example one of my relatives that his name is reza and he was a teacher 50 years ago in tehran. he salary was vary low and he did not even paid for his house rent. his life experience tauths me being a teacher was vary diffecult in the pas and peolpe did not like to spend for learning and as result teacher salary was very low.
In conclusion, while various perspective and viewpoint on the issue exist, it is evident more supporting arguments that claim teacher are more valuated thesedays rather than insist on contrary opinion. theacher are more accpeted in current time and most of persons in world like them and also they get high salary that show they are appreciated more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49101796407 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26323542142 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0675338131 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210274589073 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687602916197 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477459544528 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132370846631 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478743655169 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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