people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss and give your opinion.
People have distinct perspectives about the principal cause of crime. While some people argue that innate characteristics bring about crime, I believe that crime arises as a consequence of social issue and poverty.
There is a belief that human nature determines whether a person become a criminal. Firstly, people who are cruel seem more easily to commit offenses than those who are equable. Actually, many crime cases, perhaps even felony cases, have taken place unfortunately since criminals who face up with the act of provocation are unable to curb their aggressive behavior. Secondly, bad characteristics, including laziness and selfishness, also breed future offenders, who seek to acquire a huge amount of money without working legally for it. There are, hence, strong reasons supporting the view that bad inborn nature results in crime.
In spite of the above arguments, I am more inclined to the option that external problems, other than human internal nature, pave the way for an increase in crime. For instance, serious social issues namely alcohol and drug addiction could undermine citizens’ law compliance, which might change law-abiding citizens to become offenders. Another reason is that, more broadly, poverty leads to a rise in crime. Should individuals do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempered to perform illegal actions so as to sustain their life and support their families.
In conclusion, although both of the views certainty have the own validity, I believe that the problems in society and living in penury mainly responsible for offense activities.
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'views'' or 'view's'?
Suggestion: views'; view's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34645669291 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77985097715 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696850393701 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7350223228 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245746174534 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811220886068 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710712722948 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132353108389 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727382788852 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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