Do you agree or disagree with this following statement,the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reason and example to support your answer

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...st delightful activities that people do,  it is also strongly recommended by psych...
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...from depression and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to tur...
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...sion and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling...
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...dividual desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience ...
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... desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , person...
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... turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i ten...
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... better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group w...
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...ore  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other...
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...ficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other may hold ...
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...up wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advoc...
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...osite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.  some reaso...
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...will advocate my view for.  some reason . When a professional one accomany tripp...
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...hen a professional one accomany trippers , traveling will be a mre instructive ex...
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...sional one accomany trippers , traveling will be a mre instructive experience. M...
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... will be a mre instructive experience. Most of people are just pursuing pleasuring from their...
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...e a mre instructive experience. Most of people are just pursuing pleasuring from...
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...just pursuing pleasuring from their trip ,they observ tourisms attractions ,wherea...
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...r trip ,they observ tourisms attractions ,wherease almost   know nothing about th...
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...ey observ tourisms attractions ,wherease almost   know nothing about their histor...
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...v tourisms attractions ,wherease almost   know nothing about their historical back...
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...nothing about their historical backgroud ,but tour leaders usually have broad inf...
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...othing about their historical backgroud ,but tour leaders usually have broad info...
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...ers usually have broad information about such affairs buildings  architecture , ...
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...ve broad information about such affairs buildings  architecture , people who use...
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...formation about such affairs buildings  architecture , people who used to live t...
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...t such affairs buildings  architecture , people who used to live there snd so o...
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...itecture , people who used to live there snd so on , tour guides knowledge is not...
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...people who used to live there snd so on , tour guides knowledge is not limited to...
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...uides knowledge is not limited to places ,they also are familiar with customs and...
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...edge is not limited to places ,they also are familiar with customs and rituals be...
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...roducing them traveler no only recognize them but also will be able to communicat...
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... be able to communicate with inhabitants  .for example we have so much annual reli...
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...be able to communicate with inhabitants  .for example we have so much annual relig...
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...ry and when tourists participate in them ,feel getting close to nattives . Second...
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... in them ,feel getting close to nattives . Second,traveling on tour is more arran...
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...feel getting close to nattives . Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tourss guider...
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...e arranged, tourss guider usually create  a schedule beforehand and decide based o...
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...dule beforehand and decide based on that .tour leader s acquaintance about a cert...
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...eforehand and decide based on that .tour leader s acquaintance about a certain pl...
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...der s acquaintance about a certain place lead to groups members dont miss visiti...
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...uaintance about a certain place lead to groups members dont miss visiting of any...
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...intance about a certain place lead to groups members dont miss visiting of any of a...
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... certain place lead to groups members dont miss visiting of any of attraction eve...
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...d to groups members dont miss visiting of any of attraction even ones which are not famo...
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...groups members dont miss visiting of any of attraction even ones which are not fa...
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...ttraction even ones which are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners m...
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...ich are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most...
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...h are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most a...
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...me in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is pr...
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...e in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is pre...
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...le form , even the time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will hav...
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...rm , even the time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will have mi...
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...e time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will have minimum wasted ...
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...g meals is preordained .so passengers will have minimum wasted time and maximu...
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...me and maximum efficiency from traveling . Consequently ,tour leadering could be ...
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...fficiency from traveling . Consequently ,tour leadering could be a source of inco...
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...ur leadering could be a source of income for both country and guiders .Appointing...
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... of income for both country and guiders .Appointing tour leaders in historical bu...
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...f income for both country and guiders .Appointing tour leaders in historical buildings ...
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...ing tour leaders in historical buildings is somehow creating a jobs position and...
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...our leaders in historical buildings is somehow creating a jobs position and tou...
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...ical buildings is somehow creating a jobs position and tourism foundation pay the...
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...n and tourism foundation pay them salary .also if a country purposes to make mon...
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...tourism foundation pay them salary .also if a country purposes to make money from...
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...money from tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe...
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... tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe some exper...
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...gh to introduce the countrys attractions ,and encourage people to opt that countr...
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...attractions ,and encourage people to opt that country as their destination.i put ...
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... opt that country as their destination.i put in proposal that both people and go...
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...overnments have to pay more attention to getting help from tour leader, specially...
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...p from tour leader, specially government should persuade students to follow this...
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...our leader, specially government should persuade students to follow this job aca...
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...e students to follow this job academicly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, so, whereas, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3726541555 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98312946667 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648793565684 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.1344086022 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 246.720696418 48.9658058833 504% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 334.0 100.406767564 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.1666666667 20.6045352989 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 73.0 5.5376344086 1318% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129747307912 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658635999171 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217540481725 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617059440984 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215468590522 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 11.7677419355 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 58.1214874552 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 10.1575268817 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.01818996416 144% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.0537634409 267% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.