You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
write a letter to the manager of the hotel,
- say where you think you left the papers
- explain why they are so important
- tell the manager what you want him to do
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing with regard to a few important documents that I have left at your hotel while I was attended a meeting on 27th of July.
On Thursday, 27th of July I attended an important work meeting in which all the managers of my company attended. At the end of the meeting I was busy talking to some of the clients of the company that I managed to forget a number of important documents. I was sitting in chair number 12 and I believe you can find them there.
The documents are the business plan of an important project that should be fulfilled by the end of the next month, so I guess you would understand how important these documents are for me.
I would be grateful if you could check the conference room and see whether you can find the documents or not.
I am extremely looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nd of the meeting I was busy talking to some of the clients of the company that I managed t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, i guess, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49382716049 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51485451219 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1198563446 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321081654814 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121311517945 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554948422986 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16960510172 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019574783412 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.