You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Maria,
How are you? Hope this will find you in good health. At first, I apologize for the delay to give a reply to your letter, as I was busy with shifting to my new home. I am just writing to let you know about my new place of living.
It is known to that I was not very happy about my old home. It was not only noisy but also insecure to reside. Since it was on the ground floor, there was much scope for the miscreants to do theft. Whenever I complained about these problems to the landlord, he did not pay any attention to my problems. At last, I decided to move from that place.
Now, my new home is very comfortable and secure. It is a typical residential place, so the people are very concerned about making any crowd. The building is under the surveillance of the security camera, which makes me feel more secure than before.
I would like to invite you to visit my new house with your family on this coming weekend. I hope we can have fun and enjoy with each other.
Take care and write back soon.
Toya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Take care and write back soon. Toya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24747474747 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17228674701 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9327764463 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161635677252 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501523029705 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649281959744 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851565239378 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915118824735 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.