Do you agree or disagree? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainments and athletics, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Even though many sociologists and some of the people argue as if it is a general truth that previous generation were more free and self-sufficient in their decisions, I firmly recommend that in past children were more independent and need their parent’s help. In this world by evolving technologies, improvement instruments and facilities and excellent relationships and communications, youth people are not rely on their adults and they select perfect circumstances and conditions. And believe it or not, today young children have enough information and they are independent. I will elaborate my idea with some significant reasons in the following paragraphs.
One of the meaningful reasons coming to my mind at first is that development technics and methods such as utilize on the internet teenagers are freely in their plans. As a matter of fact, children access to an enormous information stock which they can find and consider everything on that, the computers and internet are the best guides that student can search and take more date and address that they need. To clear this statement I will give an example, for several years ago, when I decided to opt a major in university I did not have any information related to various files and also types of universities in our country. Then, I always asked a lot of questions to my parents and my brother about them and I asked them to help me select a great major. Now, not only I want to apply in foreign universities and developmental countries, but I also get many information about native people in Canada on the internet. As you can see, technology makes people be aware and select their way without any help of older people.
Another my remarkable reason is that improvement tolls and devices such as enhanced transportations and cellphones prepare better situations for young children that they are not dependent on their parent to some decisions. For instance, previous generation could not go and travel in far distends for traveling or studying in some cities’ universities so they have to follow their parents’ ways. For my older brother, he accepted in a big and perfect university approximately 15 years ago, due to more distant and lack of increased transportations, my parents did not let him to go. However, we can see his son is studying in abroad.
The last but not the least nowadays, we witness widespread communications and relationships between people, especially among young children which they are more independent to their parents and they solve their problems or questions easily. For example, my friend often take me some advice related to my feeling that I have never released them to my parents and I chose the best method connect to them. This experience thought me if people have better relationship with their friend, they will have a great option related to their decisions.
As a result, I believe that by modern world, children have democracy to select their future way due to access to huge information, different people around them via broad opinions, strength facilities that can help them to be independently.
As I am a youngest children in my family, I am not rely on my parents’ ideas compare with my older brothers.
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- TPO-25 - Independent Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Even though many sociologists and some o...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Even though many sociologists and some of the people argue as if it is a general trut...
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Line 5, column 855, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...developmental countries, but I also get many information about native people in Cana...
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Line 5, column 855, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...developmental countries, but I also get many information about native people in Canada on the in...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...elp them to be independently. As I am a youngest children in my family, I am no...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...oungest children in my family, I am not rely on my parents' ideas compare with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2709.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03531598513 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03112666959 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494423791822 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5972581957 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.578947368 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3157894737 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125060650925 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044907699717 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333567147706 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681487378872 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300605197414 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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