The table shows the percentage of very good rated by first year students

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The table shows the percentage of very good rated by first year students.

The given table compares the ratings assigned by the first year students on 5 different resources as Pre-course information, Teaching, Tutor, print resources and other resources of Economics, Law and Commerce.

Overall, it can be seen that while Commerce earned the highest grading, the lowest appraisal was achieved by the Law subject. A notable feature is that the resources provided by the mentioned three courses exhibited mixed popularity among the students.

In detail, in terms of Pre-course information, Commerce topped the list with 95%, followed by Law at 72%. And in the last place wa...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly, much lower than remaining subjects. Turning to other resources, Commerce sto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16751269036 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87538249172 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4047506654 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550648700376 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251166561728 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500005317124 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045869182371 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615415774765 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

flaws:
why 'the resources provided by the mentioned three courses exhibited mixed popularity among the students.' ?

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Goof Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 197 200
No. of Characters: 965 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.898 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.787 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.44 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.699 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4