The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way of recycling of a product. There are 7 steps in this cycle.
In the first step, manufacturers build plans and design to produce their goods for customers. Next, supplies need prepare materials and energy resources using for a production process. It is quite important, because the materials decide the quality of production. After collecting resources, producers begin made merchandise when products are ready for sell, all of them are carried on packaging and distribution. The step 5 is for selling when the production process completes. Goods will be sold in the market, such as supermarket or online website. Producers persuade customers about quality of merchandises which determine the growth of company. Customers will consider not only model but also function, and they buy these productions if it is suitable for the demand. Finally, products could be used by customers, if these have something wrong, they will be disposed or recycled for new resources.
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- The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
.... After collecting resources, producers begin made merchandise when products are read...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: FOR_SELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for sale'?
Suggestion: for sale
...ade merchandise when products are ready for sell, all of them are carried on packaging a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32278481013 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92416707533 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708860759494 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4915755133 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0639876167963 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313791218726 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335145431875 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877220746425 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469178184761 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.