Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves oriental and occidental. There are bound to be differences on economical, social and cultural front as well. Therefore the issue whether some people are pursuing dangerous support activities such as skydiving, motorcycle sport, white-water river rafting is no exception and irrefutable and has it own advantages and disadvantages. Ultimately, I opine that pursuing dangerous activities can be detrimental to human lives.
I will explain why with pertinent argument and examples. There are myriad of argument in favor of my stance, the most conspicuous one is the immediate death that occur as a result of dangerous sport. survey has proof that 90% of people partaking in dangerous sport Die on the sport.
Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that, inexperience people taking part in this sport end up with one form of disabilities or the other. Despite the assistance of a trainer with this people the sport is still disastrous.
For instance, underpinning the aforementioned an empirical part of my argument is that many people have been trap in mountains, forest, and rivers without help from loved ones and trainers, only for them to be found dead after few days of searching for them.
However, the situation seems dire, there are several steps we can take to make real tangible changes. Firstly, federal and state government should come together to implement a law that will guild the general public about dangerous sport.
Secondly, there should be a well accredited schools for those who are interested in dangerous sport to pass through before embarking on such sport. The fact that the sport is dangerous it also have positive aspect to human lives such as physical fitness, fun, and opportunity to socialize with new friends.
In conclusion, everything has its pros and cons. We must be vigilant enough to eliminate the cons and this is only possible if we can have the right perception and perspective towards the issue of pursuing dangerous sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82608211639 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6346570132 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156370219954 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506497510993 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730087728033 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693354460244 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707132436806 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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