The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by geothermal energy. This process is in 5 stages which some parts of it, are underground and others are on the ground.
First of all, cold water that is in container, pumped down about 4.5 km underground. After that by injection, the cold water become warm in the Geometrical zone that is surrounded by hot rocks.
Then the hot water pumped up on the ground that is condensed in a container. In this stage, mentioned container is linked to another room that has a turbine. The turbine is circulated by the steam which is produced in previous stage and this rotation produce electricity in a generator. Then with generator, cable, and pylon, electricity distributes in different places.
In summary, the geothermal power plant is divided in 5 steps and each step does some important works that lead to produce electricity by water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97986577181 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86598399164 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2591413066 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0584576025926 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027828371467 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497606527925 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038639046653 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334707825894 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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