some people claim that government should take action to ensure that people have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, believe that people should decide which way they prefer to leave their lives.
what’s your opinion?
In recent years, having healthy lifestyle has been at the center of global debates, and it becomes an arguable question that who has the responsiblity for preparing people's health, the people themselves or the government? Many attitudes exist towards this issue.
On the one hand, many people note that one of the major responsibilities of the government is to ensure that the members of a society live healthily. This is feasible by preparing for them accommodations and facilities which are dealing with their health. First and foremost is the food which people consume daily such as vegetables, fruits, and dairy products. Therefore, the government should blame the shoulder if these products are spoiled or unhealthy. Secondly, sports clubs, swimming pools, and other sport's accommodations should be accessible in order to prevent obesity, and other consequences of the passive lifestyle. Last but not least, the government's major contribution to health is not only in diagnosing and curing the ailments but also in preventing and rehabilitating them. For instance, it is the government duty to invest the public money on preventing the widespread diseases by vaccination. Thus, the government plays a significant role to bring and preserve people's health.
On the other hand, others claim that considering all actions above, having a healthy lifestyle is an individual term. In fact, neither the government nor anyone else can bring an individual a healthy lifestyle. Meanwhile, people could not live healthy unless they decide to, schedule for and stick to it. Even if a myriad of sports clubs exist, still many may continue their passive lifestyle. Consequently, there is no guarantee for having healthy life unless an individual decides to have.
To sum up, in order to live healthy not only does the government action need, but also the individual decisions are required. Without these factors acquiring health and a healthy lifestyle are not feasible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...f a myriad of sports clubs exist, still many may continue their passive lifestyle. Conse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in fact, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35048231511 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94056325434 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7900354207 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274959317393 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803154898787 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477791571908 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154657488891 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492027412332 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.