Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior.
Do you agree or disagree?
Immigration has been at the center of global debates these days. The majority of people have a tendency to go abroad due to having a high quality of life and acquire more academic skills. However, migrant encounter various problems which culture shock is at the top of them. This is absolutely agreed that immigrant ought to admit the differences and make effort to tackle the problems by adopting the situation in order to conserve the integrity of society as well as gain progression in foreign society.
First and for most, by considering the main purpose of immigration, it understands that people tend to migrate to seek succession in occupational level and academic degrees. If they do not accept their new home regulation, they would never achieve their goals. Take Islamic countries as an example, females should wear a scarf to conceal their hair. Also, they should dress up at work. Therefore, it is not acceptable to ignore the law. Thus, newcomers should obey the rules of their new countries to become accepted in society and thrive in their career.
Furthermore, it is obvious that newcomers should be accepted too. Countless developed countries open the door for immigrants to enhancing the number of skill workers result in improving economic stability. If the newcomers refuse the rules, they would cause chaos. A good salient example is driving rules. Immigrants should accept the differences of driving rules to inhibit the unrest in streets. Thus, it is crucial for newcomers to obey the law, so that they accepted to the new society and they can live peacefully.
By the way of conclusion, immigrant inevitably finds it difficult while they enter to the new society. To battle these problems, it is vital to revise the new country‘s rules and accept them in order to have the homogenous society to share interests and goals. In addition, this will prevent conflict in the host society while they can live more cheerfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02777777778 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70287736118 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1524011822 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7368421053 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201737005149 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557684491262 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523887444223 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116164564042 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527666009414 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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