For a successful company, selling products depends more on company's reputation or it depends more on if they provide discount and free offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the question “whether the prosperity of a company depends on offering the discount or strong reputation?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that focusing on offering discount is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common view that market strategy based on offering discount plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the companies will have this opportunity to boost up their revenue as well as by the use of tact the growth of the company and products will be increased. Secondly, it can be argued that not only they can promote their popularity, but also contribute to expeditious progress. In addition to this information, it should be taken into account that the majority of customers will make an effort to cover their basic need as a result of reasonable price.
However, there is no doubt that offering discount provides some people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that the companies enforce to spent large amount of money on advertising their products. Moreover, those companies that suggest goods with low prices are not enough trustworthy and most of them are tricky.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that to increase the popularity of offering discount some informed decision must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... or strong reputation?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09252669039 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94511024336 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4306766644 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114410348792 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394583039274 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444253858102 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697707876204 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037637734492 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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