Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The new modern era has brought many challenges and changes. People need to develop many skills in order to be able to tackle these issues properly and accurately. Humans are social creatures which means they are capable of communicating with others for various reasons and benefits, so they need to make friendships to have a better life in general. Some people might think lasting relationships with few people is the only thing they need, however, I believe having as many friends as possible is more beneficial. This essay will cover this matter.
First of all, humans are dependent on each other to make communities to both survive and prosper in life. Being able to make new friends has several advantages. One such obvious benefit is that people can learn from each other, they can learn to develop many skills and improve their potential abilities much easier if they interact with other groups of people regularly. My own experience is a compelling example of this matter. When I was pursuing my undergraduate studies at my university, I made many friends with almost all my classmates. We walked around, had many parties and had a lot of fun together. The important point is that, we always helped each other in our studies and other difficult situations. We learned the importance of group activities which made us really successful in our lives today.
In addition, more new friends means more pleasure. People can enjoy life with ones they feel more close to, and this can lead to pure happiness. With more friends around us, we have more opportunities to choose to share and enjoy. For instance, my friends and I are so intimate and we plan almost every single event and gathering with the help of each other. Once we decided to have a trip to an exciting place and we all talked about our desires about where we like to go. Finally, we voted and decided to travel to Venice, Italy. That trip undoubtedly was one of my best experiences because we share those amazing moments together.
Finally, there are many moments in life that people might face hardship. In such times of need, they need good friends to reach out and ask for their help. If they have established good relations with many friends, they have better options to get assistance in order to resolve a problem as there will be more intimate volunteers to rely on. For example, I remember one of my friends had a terrible accident when she and her family were going to another city. Unfortunately, some members of her family passed away left negative mental effects on her. Our group decided to make her happy and hopeful toward life. So, we invited her to join us on a long trip for camping which was really helpful and encouraged her again to continue her life.
In conclusion, there are many moments in life when we value true friendships. Although, having a few trustable and close friends may seem beneficial, in my opinion, people will benefit from having many friends in life because they can help them succeed and enjoy the life and also, they can help them in times of need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2538.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 534.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75280898876 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48553164397 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488764044944 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5715531558 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5172413793 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4137931034 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03448275862 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203002413748 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585567177746 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451212412805 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122287785056 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326450954484 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.